May 14, 2007

they die because they rarely change places
they live to be given and taken
and after being smelled once
or a few times those luckier ones
they just wait for their last day
motionless
and when it comes
they do change place
but there's no heaven
i'll let mine have some more time
though its time has passed already
no one even knows when
cause no one was looking


5 comments:

AGA said...

I just wanted to let you know that I enjoy your blog and I always look forward to reading it.

nataluv said...

thank you aga, you are a nice reader and a friend

Anonymous said...

I love this poem - beautiful - if I can say so.... I visit your blog every day...

nataluv said...

thank you japanese girl ;)

Magda said...

I must admit that I share the comments above. What you write always makes me think deeper about life, and feel more..